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Post by ☺Katie Butler☺ on Apr 10, 2011 16:28:08 GMT -5
If you could wish for anything;
Would it be immortality?
True love?
Happines?
If you had a day to live;
Would you live like the happiest man alive?
Or would to weep over your sorrows?
If you could be the most powerful man alive;
Would you rule with an iron fist?
With compasion?
Hunger for bloodlust?
Trust?
If you had to give for love;
Would you give your voice?
Your vision?
An arm?
Your life?
Would you give it all up?
Faced with one desicion...
What would you do?
Not made by me. I found it online somewhere. I'm not even sure what it means.
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Post by Ari Kohl on Apr 10, 2011 16:45:47 GMT -5
DEEP! This is like so awesome. Poems rock! Heres a poem by me:
Scars
The deepest scars are imprinted with in,
Leaving a mark on even souls without sin.
Picture perfect, dirt pour, or filthy rich,
Scars are scars and effect all with the flick of a switch.
It was bad. I know. But I came up with it in all of 45 seconds. So take that in mind.
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Post by ☺Katie Butler☺ on Apr 10, 2011 16:48:26 GMT -5
You know, a good thing to get CC on poems and not feel bad: Say you got it from somewhere else, and insist you didn't make it.
I use that tatic alot on stories, songs, and poems.
And that wasn't bad! It was really good!
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Post by Ari Kohl on Apr 10, 2011 16:50:41 GMT -5
Thank you! And I told you cabin 7 kids weren't that bad at poetry!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by ~Emmy~ on Apr 10, 2011 17:19:26 GMT -5
Meh. Technically, it's not 'effect', but 'affect'. I suggest you change that. lol. Isn't it 'poor' and not 'pour'? 'within' doesn't have a space between 'with' and 'in'. Yeah, now I get picky. But overall it was an awesome poem.
Heartlessness:
It lives in all.
Through the streets, pitiful cries call:
For their mother?
For death?
For water?
In the end, we all slaughter.
For everyday, hungry children roam the streets:
But we, and others, have plenty to eat.
Homeless children, and all in poverty,
Help them, ought we?
Everyday, every hour,
Together we kill,
For one person not doing anything,
Another signs their death will.
*sniffle* And not because I'm sick and need a tissue.
You can get a bunch of wacky stuff by looking up 'poems' on google...
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Post by Rainbow Chare on Apr 11, 2011 0:27:55 GMT -5
Lol. that's awfully true... sob
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Post by ☺Katie Butler☺ on Apr 11, 2011 16:14:52 GMT -5
Wanna submit poems? If you're embarassed, say you found it online or something so no blame goes to you.
In the dawn of the morn',
When the light, reaches sky,
In the whisper of the wind,
And the eagles soaring high.
In the wonders of nature,
The love that is born,
Will last forever,
And who can scorn:
The depths of the night sky,
The laughing of a stream,
The light of the moon,
And the forest-so green?
The crashing of waves,
The majestic clouds,
Will be in my heart...
Safe, and sound.
Sorry, couldn't think of a better closing line. Yeah, I made it up and it sucks. Deal with it.
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Post by Alexandra Tucker on Apr 11, 2011 16:24:00 GMT -5
HA! okay so those r ur poems?! random..... but watever (not to b affensive)
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Post by ☺Katie Butler☺ on Apr 11, 2011 16:28:31 GMT -5
Well excuse me for looking up stuff of google for inspiration and finding really touching pictures!
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Post by Ari Kohl on Apr 11, 2011 16:42:43 GMT -5
that was really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by ☺Katie Butler☺ on Apr 11, 2011 16:46:17 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by Ally White/Ariel Johnson on Apr 11, 2011 16:49:56 GMT -5
omg they were good!
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Post by Summer Anderson on Apr 11, 2011 17:04:08 GMT -5
Yeah, it is good.
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Post by ☺Katie Butler☺ on Apr 11, 2011 17:06:04 GMT -5
Thanks.
I was there for you,
Gave it all to you,
And you took it,
but left it behind you.
I said I loved you,
You said you loved me,
But love lives not in lies,
And you lied to me.
I always helped you,
You always helped me,
'Till that fateful night,
And that dark eve.
You were there for me,
Such a beautiful time,
Such shame to end,
Just like this little rhyme.
Well, that came outta nowhere...
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Post by Summer Anderson on Apr 11, 2011 17:11:51 GMT -5
That was...*sniffes* touching! And I sniffed because I'm sick and I just blew my nose.
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Post by ☺Katie Butler☺ on Apr 11, 2011 17:15:44 GMT -5
lol I need a tissue too I'm also sick...but I went to school anyway and just blew my nose like 20...million times the day.
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Post by ~Emmy~ on Apr 11, 2011 17:40:23 GMT -5
In the endless cosmos,
In the depths of space,
Lie stars of glory:
Something only time, can erase.
And the day, the day,
Would bring so much joy,
And the night, the night,
It would rather be avoided...
Falling through, the darkness,
Leaving the world,
Finding the peace;
To gain rest, long earned.
The shadows of past,
May haunt you forever,
But that soon will end-
When it's your turn,
Soon.
It doesn't really rhyme, can you find out what it means? Hint: Hades.
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Post by Alexandra Tucker on Apr 11, 2011 17:45:46 GMT -5
Hey your in her team? jk
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Post by Ari Kohl on Apr 11, 2011 19:31:05 GMT -5
These make the Apollo cabin smell like poo.
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Post by Ari Kohl on Apr 12, 2011 15:06:28 GMT -5
Maybe it was just a trick,
Loving someone makes me sick,
Let me go, and let me free,
Give me something to believe,
I am and was, my life a sin,
Sparkling eyes, evil grin,
We will soonly fall apart,
Destroy this fine work of art,
It is gone, lost, forgotten,
Lay me in my wooden coffin,
Laugh and smile, it all is fake,
Bound me down for your own sake,
I'm a fool, lost and confused,
Crying silently like I've been abused,
Cry little child, cry forever,
We don't care, we don't love her,
Let her die, let her burn,
Maybe this time she will learn,
Hush yourself, fall asleep,
These are secrets you must keep,
If you don't, they will know,
and straight to hell, you will go,
You're a jester in disguise,
Full of jokes, full of lies,
Hiding behind a plastic mask,
Make it strong, make it last,
But don't leave it on too long,.
For your face just might be gone,
We believed your truth for lies,
Surely witnessed your demise,
Chained and cuffed, you are bound,
Sewed your mouth, make no sound.
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