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Post by Ari Kohl on Apr 12, 2011 15:16:01 GMT -5
Bodies rotten, the dead forgotten. Tortured souls, missing holes. Painful love, is God above? Your hate thrives, your tongue lies. Your greed infests, your mind never rests. My heart bleeds, my soul needs. My scared, my face charred. This world dies, with all our lies. This world ends, it will never mend. Our hope dissolves, our problems wont resolve. Our eyes never meet, and our minds constantly cheat. Our words cruel, and our lives governed by rules. God are you even there? Can you see there is only despair? God, is this what you intended? Can you see it can not be mended? Their lifes ambition power and money. They are attracted to it, as a bee to honey. Strength of men fades, the creations which you have made. Dying flowers, God has no power. A world of corruption, pain and hate. It seems that failure has become your fate. They do not know love, they do not know fear. Everything they want will always appear. I slit my wrists and watch them bleed. Now my lord, I have done thy deed.
OMYGODS I"M A JUNIOR CAMPER NOW!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS MY 100TH POST!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOHOO! I"M GONNA GO CELEBRATE. I got this from my fave poem website. It's called poemsisland.org
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Meh devil(muahahahaha!!!!!!) meh evil!!!!!!!
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Post by Alexandra Tucker on Apr 12, 2011 15:29:00 GMT -5
YAY!!!!!! UR A JUNIOR CAMPER!!!!!!!!!!! lol
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Post by Ari Kohl on Apr 12, 2011 15:31:51 GMT -5
i'm not a newbie/yungyin anymore...
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Post by ☺Katie Butler☺ on Apr 12, 2011 15:46:37 GMT -5
coolio I'm checking that out. Lately I've been obsessed with poetry ever since my reading Class started the poetry unit two days ago. Now I've been sprouting random bits of poetry I made up in my head at the weirdest moments...
Homeroom:
Alone, again, I spend my days, Wishing I could go back. I watch the dawn and the dusk, With my feelings barely intact. The clock hand turns I stare above, Wishing for, That one true love. My heart is cold, My eyes cannot see, I die with the thought: Has no one loved me?
xD Wacko...
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Post by Ari Kohl on Apr 12, 2011 15:57:01 GMT -5
wow, i do that too sometimes.
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Post by ☺Katie Butler☺ on Apr 12, 2011 16:18:16 GMT -5
Yea. I wrote it down in my folder...
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Post by Arabella (Bella) Jones on Apr 12, 2011 16:35:11 GMT -5
Holy crap you people are good at poetry! Ally's at my house and she's saying yeah.
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Post by Summer Anderson on Apr 12, 2011 16:59:00 GMT -5
lemme try
poop
no, I'm kiddin' xD
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Post by Arabella (Bella) Jones on Apr 12, 2011 17:07:14 GMT -5
I wanna try. I'm good at songs, but Poetry is like that.
You were my friend, through high and low, Through thick and thin, And you let it show.
You are a good friend, And you'll always care for me, Anytime, anywhere, Whatever I need.
Dedicated to Ally, my real life bff. So...it's probably bad.
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Post by ~Emmy~ on Apr 12, 2011 17:14:10 GMT -5
Aw, that's good!
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Alexandra Tucker
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Meh devil(muahahahaha!!!!!!) meh evil!!!!!!!
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Post by Alexandra Tucker on Apr 13, 2011 15:15:40 GMT -5
I SUCK AT POETRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Arianna- whos ur language arts teacher??
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Post by ☺Katie Butler☺ on Apr 13, 2011 15:36:46 GMT -5
C'mon, Alex, just try!
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Post by ~Emmy~ on Apr 13, 2011 17:25:29 GMT -5
Ocean
The ripples of waves: Pounding the shore, Power so great: What could do more? The endless stretch, The open sea, Rushing, rushing, Come to me! The deep blue water, Crisp and clear. Strong and calm: No need to fear. The sun is setting: Sinking below, The water rushes, To and fro.
And...30 seconds! Darn!
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Post by Ari Kohl on Apr 13, 2011 17:55:52 GMT -5
that was good.
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Post by ☺Katie Butler☺ on Apr 14, 2011 15:30:04 GMT -5
Yeah, well, it didn't beat 23 seconds...lol my new goal in life is to make a good poem in less then 20 seconds now.
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Post by Ally White/Ariel Johnson on Apr 14, 2011 16:03:56 GMT -5
lol...I'll try, but it will suck. Period.
Crisp upon the snowy ground, Speckled crimson lies, The blood of which have died in war, Nothing we can't deny. We fight for none but power, Bodies and corpses lay, The shouts of pain and horror, But we continue to slay.
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Post by ~Emmy~ on Apr 14, 2011 16:31:54 GMT -5
That was awesome, Ally.
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Alexandra Tucker
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Meh devil(muahahahaha!!!!!!) meh evil!!!!!!!
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Post by Alexandra Tucker on Apr 14, 2011 18:03:37 GMT -5
Nah. ARIANNA WHO IS UR LANGUAGE ARTS TEACHER?!
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Post by Ari Kohl on Apr 14, 2011 19:34:38 GMT -5
butler-williams
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Post by ☺Katie Butler☺ on Apr 15, 2011 15:33:04 GMT -5
And I have no freaking idea what's goin' on...
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